My first rap song - NextGenUpdate

01-18-2013, 01:42 AM #1

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01-18-2013, 01:47 AM #2

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Pretty good, i actually liked it.

01-18-2013, 03:11 AM #3

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Originally posted by MerXz

This is my first rap song tell me what you guys think

It's pretty good for a first, but I'd like to hear your voice develop more. Good luck.

01-18-2013, 03:13 AM #4

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Thanks I appreciate it.

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Thanks for the feedback

01-18-2013, 03:49 AM #5

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Some of the stanzas don't make sense lol but I like it

01-18-2013, 05:41 AM #6

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Thanks and like which?

01-18-2013, 05:51 AM #7

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You from new york ? ?

Originally posted by MerXz

This is my first rap song tell me what you guys think

01-18-2013, 05:52 AM #8

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No im not, why?

01-18-2013, 11:41 AM #9

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Sounds reasonably well, but there are still a few gaps, which could mend it.