Post: My first rap song
01-18-2013, 01:42 AM #1
MerXz
Are you high?
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FwiskyFIFA, UnknownKid
01-18-2013, 01:47 AM #2
UnknownKid
Do a barrel roll!
Pretty good, i actually liked it.
01-18-2013, 03:11 AM #3
Fer
Banned
Originally posted by MerXz View Post
This is my first rap song tell me what you guys think


It's pretty good for a first, but I'd like to hear your voice develop more. Good luck.
01-18-2013, 03:13 AM #4
MerXz
Are you high?
Thanks I appreciate it.

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Thanks for the feedback
01-18-2013, 03:49 AM #5
GodDrinksPepsi
League Champion
Some of the stanzas don't make sense lol but I like it
01-18-2013, 05:41 AM #6
MerXz
Are you high?
Thanks and like which?
01-18-2013, 05:51 AM #7
FwiskyFIFA
I defeated!
You from new york ? ?
Originally posted by MerXz View Post
This is my first rap song tell me what you guys think
01-18-2013, 05:52 AM #8
MerXz
Are you high?
No im not, why?
01-18-2013, 11:41 AM #9
Sounds reasonably well, but there are still a few gaps, which could mend it.

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