Story Time(Tiem) Week 1 - NextGenUpdate

01-28-2013, 03:27 AM #1

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The End.

Please don't flatter me. I already know I am a champ at telling stories, but if you have suggestions please feel free to post them here or even PM me.

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01-28-2013, 03:31 AM #2

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Originally posted by RathHavoc

Once upon a time there were immature potatoes that were turned into Lays potato chips. However over all Cheese It, immature cheeses are given time to mature before they're baked into bite size little squares.

The End.

Please don't flatter me. I already know I am a champ at telling stories, but if you have suggestions please feel free to post them here or even PM me.

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01-28-2013, 03:32 AM #3

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Shit man.. was it really that bad? Guess I'm not going to be writing the next Twilight series and what not. :cry:

But next week, mark my words. It will be better!

01-28-2013, 03:33 AM #4

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Originally posted by RathHavoc

Once upon a time there were immature potatoes that were turned into Lays potato chips. However over all Cheese It, immature cheeses are given time to mature before they're baked into bite size little squares.

The End.

Please don't flatter me. I already know I am a champ at telling stories, but if you have suggestions please feel free to post them here or even PM me.

TL

R..Make it shorter next time.

01-28-2013, 03:35 AM #5

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Originally posted by Dman93

TL

R..Make it shorter next time.

I'll try next time. It's hard making stories man. I racked my brain on this one.. stare

01-28-2013, 03:39 AM #6

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Originally posted by RathHavoc

Shit man.. was it really that bad? Guess I'm not going to be writing the next Twilight series and what not. :cry:

But next week, mark my words. It will be better!

Maybe if you put your heart and soul into it OP... Then only then you will be able to hold the power to writing Twilight worthy stories.

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01-28-2013, 03:42 AM #7

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Originally posted by Sheldon

Maybe if you put your heart and soul into it OP... Then only then you will be able to hold the power to writing Twilight worthy stories.

That struck me right in the feels bro! You should be a motivational speaker for real!

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01-28-2013, 04:48 AM #8

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Originally posted by RathHavoc

I'll try next time. It's hard making stories man. I racked my brain on this one.. stare

How about this:

Once upon a time, everybody died. THE END

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01-28-2013, 05:34 AM #9

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Originally posted by Spongebob.

How about this:

Once upon a time, everybody died. THE END

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Maybe.. just maybe... D=

01-28-2013, 05:48 AM #10

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Originally posted by RathHavoc

Once upon a time there were immature potatoes that were turned into Lays potato chips. However over all Cheese It, immature cheeses are given time to mature before they're baked into bite size little squares.

The End.

Please don't flatter me. I already know I am a champ at telling stories, but if you have suggestions please feel free to post them here or even PM me.

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