(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Long story short, I was madly in love with a girl in High School.. about four years ago? Never told her because I was a fucking pussy. I'm certain she liked me, too. We became best friends and nothing beyond it. As graduation got closer, we grew further apart. We used to talk everyday, whether at school or not, for hours on end. After High School, we lost our touch. I recently ran into her again in one of my college classes, and got to talking again. Now, it's nothing close to the level we were at before, but it's something. All the feelings I had for her I still have. Pathetic? Fuck you. I love this girl, I know it. I want to tell her, but I'm scared to lose her again. I don't think she still has those feelings for me anyways. I usually don't come to NGU for this type of shit, but fuck it, why not?

I wrote a little poem and wanted some feedback. It's not done and I want to eventually give it to her, and at the same time, I'm scared shitless to do so. Anyways, what do you think of what I have so far?

I feel blessed to have run into you once again,
You were once my friend, please; let’s not pretend,
My feelings for you never reached its end,
I’ve always had a mad thing for you,
Four years later, I’m contemplating what to do,
I cherish each second that I’m stuck with you,
But it’s a pleasure filled attachment,
These feelings, no other girl snatched them,
They were built solely for you,
Developing slowly, who knew?
Sadly I never got the chance to speak out,
The thought of your beauty makes me weak now,
I dream of getting you clutched in my arms,
I dream of being your protector from harm,
I had my chance, but I let it slip through my grip,
You make up all of that and whom I miss,
Dreams of planting a kiss on your beautiful lips,
I’m sure for you this is just in the past,
But for me it’s pain of ever last,
I wish I never masked, but rather asked,
How you were feeling about me?
I’ve always used to doubt me,
Days not seeing you were tediously cloudy,
Were we just stupid young teenagers?
That didn’t think of what we could’ve been later?
I regret my silence each waking second,
My bad choices, and mistaken reflections,
You meant the world to me,
You were much more than just another girl to me,
You are whom I lost hours of sleep over,
You are whom I fell in deep over,
Damnit, you're beautiful,
The feelings you give me are beyond unusual,
I smile seeing your eyes brightly light up,
You are whom I never want to lose sight of,
I never again want to let you go,
And I think it’s about time that I let you know,
The true extent of my loving emotion,
I cherish your charm; it’s pure devotion.

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LADY has spoken bro, how can she resist a NextGenUpdate Reporter? On a serious note that poem is pretty good and its obvious you really like her, but hold off giving her it for a while and just ask her out! Let us know how it goes!

That's one hell of a poem, I think you have nothing to lose so give it to her, if she doesn't like it then, what have you lost? Nothing because you never actually had her in the first place. The poem is very good and I think she'll be very impressed. Good luck.

I like this response. Thanks, bud. The whole "what if" surely is crap. I've been wondering for years, and I feel like I've lost my chance. I'm still debating this idea, but let's see what the outcome is. Thanks for the reply, it gave me some much needed inspiration.



Thanks :y: I'm still terrified to ask her, though. It's weird because I feel so comfortable around her.



That "What could have been?" question haunts me a lot. Thanks for the advice :y:



Thank you! I can write, but that's the easy part. Giving this to her seems nearly impossible xD



Haha good point! LMAO. I'll see what I decide to do, eventually..

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What I will lose is the friendship which I recently brought back to life again with her. If she doesn't feel the same, things will get super awkward, ya know? We were good friends back then, and now, after running into her again, we're friends again, sure, but not to that level of what we were before.

Thats a lovely poem, go give it to her! and tell us the results! We'll be waiting!

Tell her, you know, i'm an NGU Reporter, now she is yours :troll:

Seriously, that's a pretty good poem, she will definitely like it.

Good luck.

seguro que sale bien suerte

Just make sure she isn't seeing anyone else before you send anything :p Other than that, it doesn't matter what's in the poem, what matters is that you took your time to express the love that you have for her which will touch her emotions to love you. Go for it and good luck :y: