(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Long story short, I was madly in love with a girl in High School.. about four years ago? Never told her because I was a fucking pussy. I'm certain she liked me, too. We became best friends and nothing beyond it. As graduation got closer, we grew further apart. We used to talk everyday, whether at school or not, for hours on end. After High School, we lost our touch. I recently ran into her again in one of my college classes, and got to talking again. Now, it's nothing close to the level we were at before, but it's something. All the feelings I had for her I still have. Pathetic? Fuck you. I love this girl, I know it. I want to tell her, but I'm scared to lose her again. I don't think she still has those feelings for me anyways. I usually don't come to NGU for this type of shit, but fuck it, why not?

I wrote a little poem and wanted some feedback. It's not done and I want to eventually give it to her, and at the same time, I'm scared shitless to do so. Anyways, what do you think of what I have so far?

I feel blessed to have run into you once again,
You were once my friend, please; let’s not pretend,
My feelings for you never reached its end,
I’ve always had a mad thing for you,
Four years later, I’m contemplating what to do,
I cherish each second that I’m stuck with you,
But it’s a pleasure filled attachment,
These feelings, no other girl snatched them,
They were built solely for you,
Developing slowly, who knew?
Sadly I never got the chance to speak out,
The thought of your beauty makes me weak now,
I dream of getting you clutched in my arms,
I dream of being your protector from harm,
I had my chance, but I let it slip through my grip,
You make up all of that and whom I miss,
Dreams of planting a kiss on your beautiful lips,
I’m sure for you this is just in the past,
But for me it’s pain of ever last,
I wish I never masked, but rather asked,
How you were feeling about me?
I’ve always used to doubt me,
Days not seeing you were tediously cloudy,
Were we just stupid young teenagers?
That didn’t think of what we could’ve been later?
I regret my silence each waking second,
My bad choices, and mistaken reflections,
You meant the world to me,
You were much more than just another girl to me,
You are whom I lost hours of sleep over,
You are whom I fell in deep over,
Damnit, you're beautiful,
The feelings you give me are beyond unusual,
I smile seeing your eyes brightly light up,
You are whom I never want to lose sight of,
I never again want to let you go,
And I think it’s about time that I let you know,
The true extent of my loving emotion,
I cherish your charm; it’s pure devotion.

....?

I've never been very good with poetry, so it's a lot better then something I would be able to come up with. It looks good to me man. Go for it.

All I can say bro is if she did or does have any feelings for you, then that will go down well. It doesn't matter exactly what it says, it's more that you took the time to put your feelings down on paper for her and most girls would go weak at the knees for that. Even if it doesn't go well, I reckon you should go for it. There's nothing worse than living a life of regret trust me. Obviously you're scared, it's only natural, nothing to do with being a pussy it's you being real... you're only human. If you feel like you can't hand it to her personally, maybe get a friend to do it or leave it somewhere for her to find.

Nobody wants to get rejected, but wondering "what if" is pretty crap. Be brave bro, it may be the best thing you ever do... you clearly love this girl.

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This is how the poem should go:

I feel blessed to have run into you once again,
i know you want my cock; let’s not pretend,
soooo let me put it in your rear end,
I’ve always masturbated thinking of you,
Four years later, and... i still do,
I cherish each second that I’m thinking of you,
Blowing my load feels so good,

Sadly I'm a beta and never got the chance to speak out,
I had my chance, but pussied out,
But for me it’s pain of ever last,
I wish I never masked, but rather asked,
You want sum fuk?

Damnit, you're beautiful,
The feelings you give me get me hard as a rock,
I smile thinking of you sucking my cock,

I never again want to let you go,
And I think it’s about time that I let you know,
The true extent of my loving emotion,
I cherish your pussy; it’s pure devotion.

-Stay Classy
ClutchNastii671




On a serious note, just give your poem to her! girls love kinda that stuff. (make sure she's single tho to avoid awkwardness lmao)

Its good wording used but maybe instead of making each sentence so short try combining them together and just making the last word of every other sentence rhyme, otherwise every sentence rhymes and looks clumped together. Really nice words though Good Luck

Just give it to her... Worse thing she can do is not return those feelings back to you. For me, I'd rather know I tried then not have tried at all n wonder what could have been.

Damn, you can write. You gotta be very brave to do something like this, so if you give it to her then good luck!