(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); hey guys i recently made a soundcloud and started posting some fun freestyle raps and some written stuff aswell. very new at it but i would love to see what you guys think! give me some feedback, maybe even some tips?
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Don't give up your day job.

so go eat

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Just listened to your first "rap" or whatever you call it lmao you're not gonna make it brah sorry

Your freestyle wasn't that bad. However, you need to put more passion into what you're doing. If you want people to take you seriously. You sounded very bored. Speak up some, and you'll be alright. Don't give up if it's your dream. There's plenty of unsigned artists that would lyrically murder anything you hear in the radio today. Keep practicing. Rap is an art that must be crafted.

no doubt man! yeah i need a lot of work. its not really a dream as more its something that is really a lot of fun. I love writing something that i think is really cool and trying to rap it. thanks for the feedback man! I must keep pursuing!

thanks for the feedback, hopefully you can post some of your personal aspirations on a chat board so i can leave a rude comment.

i work twice a week and have class the rest of the days. trying to rap is something i can do on my free time without having to waste gas going somewhere. I might not be good but im having fun! give me some feedback next time, could use some tips on how to get better.

Stop whispering in your mic like you're the shy kid in class.. Your songs don't make any sense and your flow is terrible. All in all your white lol Hopefully this didn't sound to harsh.

Rapping isnt for everybody. And never say nigga if you're white in a rap song, or whatever that was.

haha i am awefully white eh thanks for the feed back but im going to keep shooting for it. Its really fun, if you havent tried already go write something up and rap. And the mic problems are because im recording these at 2am when everyone is asleep so i dont want to wake anyone up, my fault on that, im going to try recording more during the day so i dont have that problem.