Post: Sneak Peak at my new rap
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09-27-2014, 03:01 AM
#1
Chris
Former Staff
Some say the world will end in fire, some say in ice.
I murdered a nigga or two, so now you’re the next sacrifice.
I hang you up to the pole, now you’re Jesus Christ.
When I walk through the town, these boys are running like mice.
Boys be playing games, it’s all for chucks and jives.
It’s like i’m a toy soldier who’s forever in disguise.
I flash out like fire, and then cool off like ice.
I’ll pull out the semi and shut you off like porch lights.
Looking from the top, I could never be at the bottom.
Ol’ dude said he like them retros, well check this, i got em.
I got your girl and i’m fuckin her wit no condom.
Before you check it, you better play dead like a possum.
Flaw is not a problem, my vocab is too awesome, almost like a flower that hasn’t had a chance to blossom.
I’m a rebirth of the elements, my raps happen to be elegant.
14 years going and been running the rap game ever since.
I cooked a nigga, straight hooked a nigga.
Life ain’t everything it looks my nigga.
Think about the past lifes we had and all the time it took my nigga.
I eat your girl half out, IPhone.
That shits starting to look like a pacific ocean cyclone.
But somehow your lyrics seem to fly by me.
I’m boutta double tap your girl, no IG.
Tsunami’s, Sandstorms, Earthquakes and more.
Straight up destruction from the west to the east shore.
Niggas stay flexin, but imma rack some more.
I cut the earth in half, just to see the core.
My raps are hardcore.
I’ll take you on. a. detour.
But like I said before, imma rack up some more.
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10-02-2014, 11:00 PM
#13
tunde1992
League Champion
Originally posted by Diarrheaissue
Here's a quick sneak peak at my rap called Fire and Ice.
Some say the world will end in fire, some say in ice.
I murdered a nigga or two, so now you’re the next sacrifice.
I hang you up to the pole, now you’re Jesus Christ.
When I walk through the town, these boys are running like mice.
Boys be playing games, it’s all for chucks and jives.
It’s like i’m a toy soldier who’s forever in disguise.
I flash out like fire, and then cool off like ice.
I’ll pull out the semi and shut you off like porch lights.
Looking from the top, I could never be at the bottom.
Ol’ dude said he like them retros, well check this, i got em.
I got your girl and i’m fuckin her wit no condom.
Before you check it, you better play dead like a possum.
Flaw is not a problem, my vocab is too awesome, almost like a flower that hasn’t had a chance to blossom.
What's Brown and a Mess? Diarrhea and This so called Rhyming fest
I am Ice, Mr Freeze, Possibly Sub-Zero, You're at the bottom of my Mind, For surely I'm the Hero
Call me Jesus christ, For i so loved the world
People came from afar to admire my wonder, While you're Over Yonder, Making "raps" , i mean Blunders, paps.
Boy, You surely have an issue, bragging about sex, You're probably cleaning with that tissue.
Don't mean to Diss you, But surely You don't think your decent, That recent line , unprotected sex, Was not to be bragged about, do you know How the diseases spread, i surely doubt.
so right Before i Detox, be sure Remember this.. I heard better raps from a fucking cereal box.
Your move :madsal:
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10-02-2014, 11:10 PM
#14
Chris
Former Staff
Originally posted by tunde1992
What's Brown and a Mess? Diarrhea and This so called Rhyming fest
I am Ice, Mr Freeze, Possibly Sub-Zero, You're at the bottom of my Mind, For surely I'm the Hero
Call me Jesus christ, For i so loved the world
People came from afar to admire my wonder, While you're Over Yonder, Making "raps" , i mean Blunders, paps.
Boy, You surely have an issue, bragging about sex, You're probably cleaning with that tissue.
Don't mean to Diss you, But surely You don't think your decent, That recent line , unprotected sex, Was not to be bragged about, do you know How the diseases spread, i surely doubt.
so right Before i Detox, be sure Remember this.. I heard better raps from a fucking cereal box.
Your move :madsal:
I am Ice, Mr Freeze, Possibly Sub-Zero, You're at the bottom of my Mind, For surely I'm the Hero
Call me Jesus christ, For i so loved the world
People came from afar to admire my wonder, While you're Over Yonder, Making "raps" , i mean Blunders, paps.
Boy, You surely have an issue, bragging about sex, You're probably cleaning with that tissue.
Don't mean to Diss you, But surely You don't think your decent, That recent line , unprotected sex, Was not to be bragged about, do you know How the diseases spread, i surely doubt.
so right Before i Detox, be sure Remember this.. I heard better raps from a fucking cereal box.
Your move :madsal:
You can call me the fucking fox, my blood is colder than an ice box.
I'm the cool kid down the street with fly shoes and nike socks.
Talking about some shit with blunder?
My nigga, your raps are so wack I could SWEAR you're steve wonder.
I sell my raps for a price, niggas say that's the style.
I've been doing this for a while, but time to settle down.
I'm the ruler of the ocean, you can call me Poseidon.
Half of the shit you're saying is overrated. Your vocab needs to be widened.
Like a COD Collat, my bullets are always colliding.
Hold your breath and take a scream.
As a shoot across your screen.
Faster than a sound or beam, from the nightmare instead of your dream.
I'm always ahead of your scheme, might be too tough for you to understand that my raps are too clean.
Get up nig. :madsal:
10-02-2014, 11:12 PM
#15
tunde1992
League Champion
Originally posted by Diarrheaissue
Here's a quick sneak peak at my rap called Fire and Ice.
Some say the world will end in fire, some say in ice.
I murdered a nigga or two, so now you’re the next sacrifice.
I hang you up to the pole, now you’re Jesus Christ.
When I walk through the town, these boys are running like mice.
Boys be playing games, it’s all for chucks and jives.
It’s like i’m a toy soldier who’s forever in disguise.
I flash out like fire, and then cool off like ice.
I’ll pull out the semi and shut you off like porch lights.
Looking from the top, I could never be at the bottom.
Ol’ dude said he like them retros, well check this, i got em.
I got your girl and i’m fuckin her wit no condom.
Before you check it, you better play dead like a possum.
Flaw is not a problem, my vocab is too awesome, almost like a flower that hasn’t had a chance to blossom.
I’m a rebirth of the elements, my raps happen to be elegant.
14 years going and been running the rap game ever since.
I cooked a nigga, straight hooked a nigga.
Life ain’t everything it looks my nigga.
Think about the past lifes we had and all the time it took my nigga.
I eat your girl half out, IPhone.
That shits starting to look like a pacific ocean cyclone.
But somehow your lyrics seem to fly by me.
I’m boutta double tap your girl, no IG.
Tsunami’s, Sandstorms, Earthquakes and more.
Straight up destruction from the west to the east shore.
Niggas stay flexin, but imma rack some more.
I cut the earth in half, just to see the core.
My raps are hardcore.
I’ll take you on. a. detour.
But like I said before, imma rack up some more.
I combine the elements , Call me the avatar.
Your the Aftermath
You're not Elegant,
You've lost your relevance
A shadow of a former man,
Not a used to be, a Never were.
Man you're outdated, I Swear Nokia made it.
You're as hardcore as Baby Carrots
I'm Subzero, Though i cannot Fly
I Control Whether You live or die.
10-02-2014, 11:20 PM
#16
Chris
Former Staff
Originally posted by tunde1992
I combine the elements , Call me the avatar.
Your the Aftermath
You're not Elegant,
You've lost your relevance
A shadow of a former man,
Not a used to be, a Never were.
Man you're outdated, I Swear Nokia made it.
You're as hardcore as Baby Carrots
I'm Subzero, Though i cannot Fly
I Control Whether You live or die.
Your the Aftermath
You're not Elegant,
You've lost your relevance
A shadow of a former man,
Not a used to be, a Never were.
Man you're outdated, I Swear Nokia made it.
You're as hardcore as Baby Carrots
I'm Subzero, Though i cannot Fly
I Control Whether You live or die.
Live or Die, who gives a fuck.
Not like I control when fire or lighting has struck.
Life is just a game, and i'm the lead player.
And you're the one artist who simply needs a prayer.
Bow down on your knees as you witness true skill.
I got so much precision that I don't need focus to get a kill.
Spread the word, to the world, Natsu is too ill.
And I might be just a little too much for your little emotions to feel.
Talk about the avatar, i'm a fucking god.
I'm an anime nigga, the real term of pain. I've got about 5 to 10 rods.
Your vocab is way too weak, so I guess it's a bit too broad.
Rap is just a style, it may take you a while.
Too come down to earth, and realize you're the hostile.
I'm the authority and you're the fucking victim.
You just caught a cold, and guess what, I'm the symptom.
10-02-2014, 11:35 PM
#17
tunde1992
League Champion
Originally posted by Diarrheaissue
Live or Die, who gives a fuck.
Not like I control when fire or lighting has struck.
Life is just a game, and i'm the lead player.
And you're the one artist who simply needs a prayer.
Bow down on your knees as you witness true skill.
I got so much precision that I don't need focus to get a kill.
Spread the word, to the world, Natsu is too ill.
And I might be just a little too much for your little emotions to feel.
Talk about the avatar, i'm a fucking god.
I'm an anime nigga, the real term of pain. I've got about 5 to 10 rods.
Your vocab is way too weak, so I guess it's a bit too broad.
Rap is just a style, it may take you a while.
Too come down to earth, and realize you're the hostile.
I'm the authority and you're the fucking victim.
You just caught a cold, and guess what, I'm the symptom.
Not like I control when fire or lighting has struck.
Life is just a game, and i'm the lead player.
And you're the one artist who simply needs a prayer.
Bow down on your knees as you witness true skill.
I got so much precision that I don't need focus to get a kill.
Spread the word, to the world, Natsu is too ill.
And I might be just a little too much for your little emotions to feel.
Talk about the avatar, i'm a fucking god.
I'm an anime nigga, the real term of pain. I've got about 5 to 10 rods.
Your vocab is way too weak, so I guess it's a bit too broad.
Rap is just a style, it may take you a while.
Too come down to earth, and realize you're the hostile.
I'm the authority and you're the fucking victim.
You just caught a cold, and guess what, I'm the symptom.
The only bowing you do is behind an alley
As i organize a Destroy you Rally
You will say the following To the friends You lacked
"Then everything changed when Tunde attacked"
You will Conform Yourself To what You have Read
My Words are For all
(Especially You ,Since you can't get a girl to Bed)
I Will Bloodbend you and Control your Breath
Be lucky i spared you from death.
10-02-2014, 11:40 PM
#18
Chris
Former Staff
Originally posted by tunde1992
The only bowing you do is behind an ally
As i organize a Destroy you Rally
You will say the following To the friends You lacked
"Then everything changed when Tunde attacked"
You will Conform Yourself To what You have Read
My Words are For all
(Especially You . Since you can't get a girl to Bed)
I Will Bloodbend you and Control your Breath
Be lucky i spared you from death.
As i organize a Destroy you Rally
You will say the following To the friends You lacked
"Then everything changed when Tunde attacked"
You will Conform Yourself To what You have Read
My Words are For all
(Especially You . Since you can't get a girl to Bed)
I Will Bloodbend you and Control your Breath
Be lucky i spared you from death.
My raps are stone cold.
I swear, just hit the road.
Your raps are so old, it's like copy and paste from mold
Like blood bend, you're controlled.
My secrets shall remain untold, as I walk up with the greatness and life unfolds.
Rap is not a toy, you must know how to act.
Nigga you can't compare to me and that's a goddamn fact.
You look like and overgrown bitch, call you an artifact.
I swear you looked so fucked up I could swear your sniffing crack.
Look around. All eyes on you, so what the fuck you plan to do?
My raps are just straight crushing you. Like a cooked up beef stew.
Nigga you want beef with me? Here comes the Neg Train, Choo-Choo!
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