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Feedback is appreciated.*

I like the lyrics and beat but what doesn't cut it for me is the way you rap, meaning you're just talking rather than really expressing yourself into the song and beat. If you did that then it would sound like good old 90's east coast golden era hip hop like Rakim

Totally expected a "fuck you" reply when I got my notification that you had quoted me.
I commend you for your reply.

It was mainly a storytelling song rather than a hype song honestly. I understand where you're coming from though, I guess that comes with experience; as I can't really see where I'm lacking expressing myself.

I like it though, keep it up, you'll get better with experience. Where you from? East coast? West?

wow ur growin soft over da years i expected a fuck this coon tunes niger bop rap crap and a link to quality kvlt black metal/ country music

I'm in South carolina. I usually say South Side. But this is Eastern US so yeah.

10/10 - TriggeredDsas