(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); just made this.Tell me were i can improve. think i did the text good this time to.

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Bit darker

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use normal colors for the overall picture, only use affects/colors where the action is going on.

Yeah like OC said, only use effects where the action is taking place, also the dots around the guy don't look good.