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2 things

first the dimensions arent really sig dimensions though im sure you know that

second the backround has to much going on and the render doesnt seem to the focal point

overall very good work 9/10

all i like is the text and effects 3/5

Too much going on in the c4ds

yeah the background bit to mutch going on might fix that. Trying work with c4ds now think im doing pretty good with c4ds. but still need some
Practice with it.