kk nice coor combination but i don't like the way the c4d's are put above the render and i also don't like the border's color last but not least , look at the dude it's chin o_O do something about it overall 5/10 because it's your first in a month.
EDIT!: I also noticed that the render's opacity is too low at most of the places , also do something about that.
nice try, here's what you should improve:
make the render a bit smaller.
make the border about 2px.
recreate the background.. its looks ugly-ish
some lighting
the background just has a c4d mixed in at 50% opacity.
the render is full opacity i just erased the edges a little with a 50% opacity brush + smudged a duplicate of the render below it.
i tried to make the gun flash sort of the place of lighting lol