New Sig. rate/hate - NextGenUpdate

10-24-2008, 04:40 PM #1

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I rendered it, animated it, and used brushes to try and create "real" clouds on top of the c4d.
Then I faded, blended, and brushed in some "dust".
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10-24-2008, 05:31 PM #2

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could be better.
ways to improve,
1.change colour for the border
2.remove the brushes over the renders
3.use gradient maps and other adjustment effects
4.darken the overall sig
5.blend renders more

overall 3/10

10-24-2008, 05:34 PM #3

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4/10 add more colours

10-24-2008, 06:33 PM #4

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change background. blend abit. i like the animation tho Smile

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10-24-2008, 06:49 PM #5

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Thanks i'm thinkin about doin a full auto AK from SOCOM. Ill have to render a good image tho.

I edited and posted one that took everyones advice.

10-24-2008, 06:50 PM #6

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good job! 6/10
i like the concept of the animation! Happy

get some other sparks around the signature and its fine!

10-24-2008, 07:22 PM #7

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i like the animation, but change the border, 6/10

10-25-2008, 06:36 AM #8

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More to the animation, more color, and different border.

10-25-2008, 07:44 AM #9

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yeah really nice animation man but the c4d is badly placed and you should also add a bit more color and blend your render 6/10

10-25-2008, 05:55 PM #10

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How do i "blend" a render? I smoothed the edges, i darkened around him.
I can use a really light brush and erase some of the outer edge of the render.... would that be good?