I think you should make the canvas a bit smaller so you don't have as much open area. Also the c4d on the right could use a bit of sorting it out. I kinda like the sort of low quality type effect the space stock gives, but it should flow over the render too, rather than having a noisy sort of looking background and a clean render.
Although you kind of are trying a new type of thing, your also sort of not, its the same idea as pretty much every other signature that has come from you eg. stock,render,c4d ...