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Very nice really but you carnt see most of the text. 7.5/10

i know, i did that on purpose.

i dont like but thats my opinion, a bit to bright in the middle too. very nice tho nice work.

I like it but i think the render should blend in a little more i'd say 7\10

Move the render up the canvas for the compositional aspect of things, then get rid of that massive light source in the middle of the canvas, it draws too much attention, the render should be focal point of the sig, and scrap the text aswell. But the actual effects and background work is very nice.

the focal is that splotch of light rather than the render, and the font doesn't match, nor does the flacement of the font. it has no flow to it but it does have some decent overall depth.

Do you have a font pack for me?
i only have the standard windows fonts...

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V2 Added

v2 is worse imo, the render just fades out, as do the C4D's, looks really weird and you've messed up the composition with that big pink C4D.

ok, added the v3