the main prob is the text is the focal point not the render, maybe try using some c4d's / effects to liven it up..
i dont really like the border ,, but thaat may be just me
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Yeah i agree with Phoenix you want people to look at the render not the text and imo i not feeling the black stock/outter glow around iron man but thats just me. keep at it
need a more lively background, then turn your opacity down on the text so it blends a little better, and i agree with Uber, not too keen on the black outline on IronMan, but keep at it and you'll definately get better
Text seems to be the vocal point so id make Render Lil bit smaller so you can see his sholders and move it to the middle Make Text Smaller and Add some effects and a Bg.KIU