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Post what you think. :cool:

Dayum you're getting good But yeah, Background and C4D are a bit overpowering IMO. And text needs work also.

I like it just not the text as you can half see it

Ican see the text perfectly :confused::confused:

dont like the black text and u shuld have blurred the railing under the c4d that will look mutch better and maby darker gradient map over the c4d

Really sharp on his shirt, the text kills it and the colours are way too strong but other than that not bad

Looks good, but as krunch said its too sharp in places and you need to work on the text.

I'd move the whole stock up a bit more, so we see more of the body, and change the colour or style of the text like everyone else said. Maybe the shirt and C4D area is a tiny bit too sharp, but eh. I'd also try and make sure you can't see the railing through the C4D, I think it's just look better.