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Tried something new. Couldn't find any renders or stocks that I liked so I was like let me try this. And thats what I got. I'm still working on my lighting and depth. Please crit me on my light and depth I can careless about the other stuff. And actually Crit me don't say oh nice sig just to get your damn post count up

this is excatly my point. why? just explain to me why you would comment on something just to day 6 words. Whats the point? next time don't even post

lighting is could be better and the depth is there txt looks a lil choppy on my screen or maybe its just me but it looks good to me

yea but you obviously didn't read the full thread and i specifically said not to do that. Im done arguing, not trying to start a flamming war.

Overall nice signature. I Would give it a 8/10. Agree with Burn the text looks a little choppy but we are all bad with that so it's nice and simple.

Lighting and depth are only two of your problems, but this makes it easier (and faster) for me to comment.

Depth needs a lot of work. The blurring is too sudden and extreme to add any real depth, it just looks like a lot of blurry effects. Protip: split the tag up into multiple frames of depth.

The soft-brush blob lighting is terrible, but make it a little less obvious (Gaussian Blur it) and get more intense darks in there. Then you'll be better.

That's not to mention the crappy text, clipping mask, border, or focal placement. But you didn't ask about that, so I won't mention it.

Needs better text, and get rid of the clipping mask.

Get some twist text that blends in with the backround. Looks alright though

ok well i was pretty much gonna say nice tag and woot post count up...but lol i actuly read ur post first XD

I pretty much agree with _dep, as far as the lighting and stuff goes, but your overall compisition is a lil off but you dont wanan hear that so here is my way to help you out...

lighting... the best way ive found to add lighting is use a B&W gradian set to umm i cnat htink of the setting, but the one were it makes a circle XD, that will give a good focal point, aswell as lightin the area around the focal, also try to use the natrual lighting of the tag when chosing the focal point, if u have to use the sharpen tool to sharpen it so you arnt shapening the whole tag.

Depth... well this can be tricky in a tag like this, well the best thing to do would be slowly blur the bg a lil at a time in proportions...(doesnt always work but helps somtimes)