Sorry but i dont like it, get rid of the c4d on her face (erase the C4D layer on her face)
i think having 2 renders is'n the best idea.
i cant really tell what the background is just looks like aload of C4Ds, just because people say use C4Ds you dont have to use 10,000 in one sig.. also the text does'nt fit..
5/10