it looks a lot better than the other one. make the name a lil bit smaller, use blue, burn, dodge and sharpen to make it stand out a bit more and look better.
Thanks guillotinz =D yeah i went to the site u linked me too...And I made a Devil May Cry 4 one and colorful....its not ass good as this because its just colors every wherez haha...and thanks for the tip =) your the most helpful person thats commented on my pics =)