#1: The smudging is horrible and the text is very bad also the squiggles in the bottom left are very distracting..I like the effects around the render though.
#2: The background is too blurred and the text isn't blended in enough.If the background wasn't blurred it would look much better.If text doesn't fit leave it out all together.
Thanks for the feed back i know i just tryed filling the left hand side of the tag it was empty just plain black felt like it need something.
When i'm at home i'll edit the bottom one try what you said