lol! i think you should of desaturated it then added your own colour because all the colours are messed up, you need to add some depth and flow also you should of used a diffrent text style for this one. i like all the effects though 6.5 /10
The render looks very sharpened, also there are two c4ds that don't really fit in there (they rather stand out.) Your a really good signature maker, however your signatures have been slipping down a bit.
6/10
ps. I know my signatures suck Im just rating on the abilty of the person and the signature he made