(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Ok so ive made a few large improvements since like 5 mins ago :p, please rate and hate this signature and advice is greatfully recieved:

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(i only got photoshop last week! so please bare that in mind)

EDIT: hows this without the lines?

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nice blending but you do need 2 watch sum tuts, add c4ds, better text, light source and get rid of those lines.
gud try 7/10

ive got 2 questions: 1. what line r u on about the ones near the text? cos i can do that :p i was debating whether to have them or not.

and 2. what the heck are C4Ds?

EDIT: dont worry know what they are now thanks for the feedback +rep

ok here is my final (hopefully!) version. Ive added a C4D might add another if need be and ive also changed the text to make it fit in a bit better. what do you think?
(still gotta add light source)

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