(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); Well i really need some advice on how i could make this better, also should i use scanline or no?

My Work ( it's in my sig )

Mmk thanks a lot. I hope to see you back in GFX

i doubt ill b bak in gfx cuz ill b in college for my second year this fall and im vacationing during the summer :cool: but maybe just maybe i might make a sig if i get bored enough lol (if i get a comp tht is lol)

Lol well good luck man.

1. Scanlines aren't used by pro GFXers.
2. The perfect square grid in the BG in annoying, try liquefying it. (Filters > liquefy)
3. Take the beleval and emboss off of the text and make it NOT look like a scanline.
4. Try added a c4d around your focal or a clipping mask splatter brush.
5. Bring out your focal/render more. (sharpening/blurring/burn/dodge/lighting)
6. Good focus on color scheme.
7. Don't put a border unless it's solid black on the top and bottom. (not sides)

I can see you're improving, keep up the good work.

Thanks For the Advice! I'll pm you the result.