Post: Lp dream franky
07-18-2010, 11:29 AM #1
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with out text and i smudge the little c4ds away a bit so t looks better . and soften the guy
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07-18-2010, 11:55 AM #2
Krunch
At least I can fight
Not bad, guy looks a little grainy, clouds look pretty nice, but the little c4ds to seem too random.
Also text is horrendous
07-18-2010, 12:04 PM #3
so change text and lose the little c4ds btw that is a brush lol but i see what you mean
07-18-2010, 12:19 PM #4
Krunch
At least I can fight
probably be best to scrap the text altogether, but if you get get something to work then go nuts, maybe loose the border
07-18-2010, 12:30 PM #5
+tA.Daisho
Crumpets and tea?
Yeah text needs to go. Also maybe do something to soften up the render. Cloud effects are pretty cool though and you've added depth which is a plus.
altogether its getting to be a good Job.
07-18-2010, 03:06 PM #6
there is the second version. i am following a text tutorial now so i might uodate it agian with some better text
07-18-2010, 04:42 PM #7
Krunch
At least I can fight
Dont soften the guy lol, hes the focal, now all looks blurry and low quality
07-18-2010, 06:34 PM #8
damn it lol . thanks for the advice :p

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