Originally posted by tA.Daisho
It maybe your 2rd or 3rd attempt, but to be honest i'm not going to cover this up by saying its bad. everything looks slapped on which is never a good sign. The render does not blend and theres not much of a background.
I know this may be said a lot on this site but go to deviantart or another site and follow a tutorial there literally thousands of them and it only takes one to teach you something.