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text isn't needed,you could wrap another one of those twirly things around her leg(s).Also,did paint her or did you just slap on a couple of brushes?

sharpen? other than thay i quite like it..

You may want to brighten up her face somehow, it looks kind of dark compared to the rest of her body, text may also benefit by being different colours; green just does not seem to fit.