Show me the original stock. Or did you use a render??
Also The clip masks at the bottom could be a tad smaller other than that yes good effects and it does draw you to a central focal point.
However, it needs MORE. It looks a great start but just doesn't feel finished.
Don't think that just because I don't do GFX I don't know how to give CC and rate like some people here. I think I'm one of the better raters and CC givers.