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Its way to simple :X It looks like all you did was put a render over a gradient background and add c4ds over the BG But overall for a first its cool, maybe add some effects over the render?

No need to restate what people already said.

Blend the render with the bg and the right side doesn't seem clear/visible enough.

Thanks everyone for the help.
i guarantee it will be much better next time
Thanks,
Lifestylez