Post: +dA Collab Peyton And Venom
08-08-2010, 05:52 AM #1
Venom
At least I can fight
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08-08-2010, 05:58 AM #2
PrayForPlagues
The Black Key
Too bright of a lighting and the left side is bleh. Also the render hurts my eyes.

Keep workin at it
08-08-2010, 06:20 AM #3
Originally posted by dA
Too bright of a lighting and the left side is bleh. Also the render hurts my eyes.

Keep workin at it


lol thanks for the cnc pray

:love: =D
08-08-2010, 07:40 AM #4
Venom
At least I can fight
Thanks indeed!!

25char
08-08-2010, 08:39 AM #5
Yeah just like pray said alter the lighting is abit to much
other than that, pretty good my fellow +dA :love:
08-08-2010, 08:46 AM #6
Helios
Coolest Kid Around.
If both of you didn't like the render or couldn't work with it why use it? it's easy to change a render...

Like pray said the light is to bright, there is no real obvious flow, the render isn't blended, the C4D thing on the left doesn't look right and he looks over sharpened.

Not a bad effort though, dim the lightening and try to blend him more.
08-08-2010, 12:25 PM #7
The Low Key OG
still the same OG, but I've been low key
1) Lighting doesn't fit.
2) Eye sore
3) bad render, why not switch?
4) Text doesn't fit, bad color scheme on it.
5) No depth, add the same red/orange c4d thing in front of the render as well. That's a start.
6) I really see no blur, only sharpening. Too much of it as well.
7) Also, bad positioning of the render. Put it farther to the right.

You'll get there eventually.:jim:.

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08-08-2010, 12:28 PM #8
agree with low key..

the render is too central..
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08-08-2010, 12:48 PM #9
Irish
Samurai Poster
I wouldn't say the render is central I'd say its to big and dhould have been smaller so it would look better gone to the right more.
08-08-2010, 01:18 PM #10
Yeah personally I dont think this is worth posting on here(sorry Mikel <3) cause we both simply hated it. but thanks everyone esp. pheonix. that tut looks very informative I will for sure check it out. Also TLKOG is on top of things. he makes those lists and it stays in my head :y: =D thanks again for the cnc everybody

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