imo the c4d's/brushes are just thrown on , erase bits that dont look good
good flow the white semi-circle kinda ruins it
text is ok, could've been better
not really sure on the depth.. as the c4d's all look as their over the top of ryu, mayb blur some to make it look more realistic.
lacking lighting.
bordeer doesnt look good
Brushes are way oversharpened, text wants to be the focal, all though everythings too sharp, the way youve smudged the render (or fractal or whatever it is), to me makes it look blurry, keep at it