1) No flow
2) Destroyed render with those effects, which may be fine if they fit with the sig.
3) Left is lacking substance
4) Only brush work
5) No depth, very flat
:jim: Start using c4d's and set out to have depth on your next sig.
Yea lol, but i've got something to say, and im not offending you so please dont get offended lol, having seen this and the rest of your work in your sig shop, some crazy voice in my head tells me that you did not make the halo sig in your sig area...