i like the render but personally i dont like the background but then thats me i dont see a real problem with it yea the text needs work but i suck with text too >_<. Did you use a C4D on this one cos it looks sorta flat? might be me but idk. Also maybe a border? just neatens it up a bit
mainly trying out some brushes... didint use any c4ds
and text is bassically always the issue man... haha i hate it cause if you dont use text, someones gonna steal your work... and thanks