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but, give me your thoughts on what could be better, etc.

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Lol thanks for all the feedback and it cut off to kind of show him jumping out of something i dunno lol it seems pretty good i s'pose

that's hot, but bad text 9/10

not really fist i see the massive black on the left then the guy the the text

It's like that for a reason....

Until I saw the stock photo, I couldn't tell what I was looking at 0_0, show a little more of the stock pic and don't blend it in too much, you want it to stick out a little. Otherwise great usage of colors, and the design is cool. 8/10