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I don't really like this one.

good effects
good flow
nice colours

bad text
horrible blending

its a good tag but i think your text and lack of blending ruins it

good flow?
sorry but really? he leaning one way , everything else is going the other way.
text is meh
depth is ok , needs some work
good effects
bad blending

not bad but needs some improvements

I like the colours, nice smudging, dont like the border and as mesiah said, work on the blending, kiu

Changed font, border and tried to blend the guy more.

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Do you even understand what flow is? Yeah, the focal is moving one way, and the effects are moving in another way, but the flow still works (not the best, but it's decent) because the flows aren't clashing, simple moving away from each other.



Libertine, the first version is better in my opinion. Your biggest problem is that your smudging and effects in general are too blurry, so it's hard to see a sharp focal fitting into that.

Blending needs working on, But the colours I just love the colours.
An immediate improvement may work if you work on how sharp or blurry you want the tag to be. What I mean is the focal is very sharp and crisp however your effects are too blurry in order to fit right with the focal.
However Keep up this work your improving well.

I think people have pretty said all there is to say ... as most people said the colours are cool and have to agree with Dep i prefer the first version.
KIU

Thanks guys. Ill try some blending tuts. ^^

i never said it was really bad i just said it wasnt good.. if the flow was all going one way it would look better..