1) Stop using that text, it never fits.
2) No color scheme, goes from purple to pink to some puke grey thing.
3) Render should be on the right side.
4) No flow pattern.
5) Barely any depth.
1) Stop using that text however it may look better with a redish/purple stroke instead of a black one. Try to keep the text matching the rest of the sig.
2) No color scheme, Colours are a bit random try to keep to specific theme it helps to blend the render in.
3) Render can be anywhere but they never seem to work right in the middle.
4) Flows a big problem here, there is no flow try to work on this and you'll improve greatly
5) No depth, depth helps define a focal so always try to include at least a bit of depth.
Otherwise Good Job
Keep it up.
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1) Stop using that text however it may look better with a redish/purple stroke instead of a black one. Try to keep the text matching the rest of the sig.
2) No color scheme, Colours are a bit random try to keep to specific theme it helps to blend the render in.
3) Render can be anywhere but they never seem to work right in the middle.
4) Flows a big problem here, there is no flow try to work on this and you'll improve greatly
5) No depth, depth helps define a focal so always try to include at least a bit of depth.