Post: Coke and Afro
08-20-2010, 09:18 PM #1
Elder Legendah
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Afro

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Coca-Cola V1

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Coca-Cola V2
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CnC is appreciated.=D
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08-20-2010, 09:31 PM #2
Ok, first of all, the afro one. That c4d on the right need to be blended in more(use Ctrl + U and mess about with the colours).
With the render, try smudging around the edges of it so it blends in a little bit more.
Near the top of his afro there's some blue text, get rid of that, it doesn't look right.
With the text and the boxes, move them closer to the render. Try clipping masking the text and seeing what it comes out like, then maybe a 1px black stroke?

Ok, now for the coke one...i quite like the concept of it. In the smudging there's a kind of grainy bit, try and fix that as it doesn't look too good. Maybe chop off some of the left side so it's not as plain.

But, good work Legend. Glad to see your getting back into GFX! Smile

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Elder Legendah
08-21-2010, 10:25 AM #3
H3CTK
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Afro :

- theres no flow mate, the render looks like it just plonked there no blending attempt really, c4d to the right of his head is poorly blended.

Coca-cola:

C4d / smudging ? what ever it is is not that good like hard to explain but yea a bit plain maybe try using stronger strength on the smudge brush if you used smudge but yeah. Smile_

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Elder Legendah
08-21-2010, 11:13 AM #4
i like the afro one Happy lol

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