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CnC the Funk outta me.

Text took my attention : (
Try to place it somewhere / reduce opacity so it doesn't take your attention as you see the pic : )

I want it to be apart of the focal.."Look At Me"

Honestly, it's too big for the minimalism of effects, I don't like the monochrome or the soft brush lighting, the pentooling is bland and not all that smooth, and I don't care for the text.

I'm not the best digital artist, but if I'm being very critical of the work based on my opinion:

• The gold lighting effect in the top right on the wave serves no real purpose. The others are all on the body.
  
• Dodge tool used (Maybe not) on the right of the left hand (If you look at the image, not from their perspective), and so goes against the lighting scheme. From what I can tell, the light is coming from the left side, so the right side of their hand should be shadowed.
  
• The bottom right logo took too much of my attention, which I think should have been focused on the image itself.
  
• Also, if I'm correct, at the bottom left (next to the hand on the hip) of the image there is a dodge effect used. This breaks the grunge effect of the background as it appears it's a circle brush you used, and on the rest of the background it's a grunge brush
  

That's pretty much all I could pick out, I guess that's a good thing. Like I said, I am an amateur so if any of this criticism is off ignore me :black:

This is a really good piece and it's a good outcome as I've come to expect from your pieces.

I love the colour scheme and the actual focus on shades of red, it has turned out really nice.

:y:

//AC

Size was a problem if I made it smaller it was gonna lose even more quality, I never noticed it being so Monochrome till you said it :p thanks. It's not pentooling but who cares your close enough :p Thanks for the CnC