In freestyle-some parts over-sharpened(which really stands out) but i'm loving the colors and the smudge in this one,especially how you put the smudge on her stomach area as well.
Stockless-Same as above,some parts are over sharpened and stand out too much,the black also interferes with the flow of the colors going on(you have vibrant colors,then it switches to grey/black which doesn't make sense to me) but overall great tag.
Don't really have anything to say about the typo,vertical is awesome and so is chosen stock.I love your stuff man I really want more