slight copy of mine, but hey i dont mind, it looks pretty good but yea make the C4D's a little more visible and also blend the render a bit cos i can still see the white outline where it was cut, but thats fairly simple and you have a pretty good sig.
i said slight copy cos it is quite similar to my one - this one : You must login or register to view this content.
, probably a coinsidence. But either way i dont mind, and yours is looking pretty good. 6/10 just needs a few changes.