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tried to make it as if he is being pulled to one side the 'dark side' almost and hes reaching for the lighter side

thoughts?

nice one , the only 2 parts that are bad are the arm smudging on the left and the text

maybe put a light on the left side (flare) that might look cool.
his arm looks messy
6ish/10

Well, good try but it's not happenning. Try putting a light source around his hand, and soft dark brush it on the right side. Text is terrible

text is good..., try to blur the background of the guy to get some more depth.