This is really low quality, Not enough effects for what you were trying and text is bad.
The truth about text is that it isn't supposed to be a main point in a sig, its supposed to go along with your concept and just add that little hint of sweetness to it, If the text doesn't look good don't use it.
I know this is your 5th sig but take this into mind. Make sure you have a high/normal quality stock or render as if you don't have a high quality stock you won't hae a high qaulity sig.(You can make good ones with low quality stocks its just it will always look better with a high quality stock.)
Try add more effects, but at the same time don't spam it with effects, it can involve Fractals, C4Ds or even other stocks.
MOST IMPOTANT THING FOR A BEGGINER: Look at tutorials, and when I say tutorials I mean good looking end result tutorials not the easiest to do.
Thank you Irish. Could you link meh to really good tutorials.
And I can get a hold of how to use C4D. I know how to put them in my sig. But I dont know how to make it flow with me sig.