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Please tell me what i could improve on

The third one is the best. Don't recolor the renders so much, it makes them look weird...

just a cluttered mess of c4d's with an ugly color overlay on the render, which seems to have a bit of smudging on it that doesnt look good either. I don't like the text...keep the text simple! Keep trying and look into some tutorials to help you get to know photoshop better

The original C4D's were blue. So I changed them to black to give it a ghost look.

All i really have to say is their not good TBH.

Everything looks slapped on .

C4D is really messy and the render looks like he's taking a shit (lol) as you scratched (spelling) it more in widh then height.
And as kratos said, text is really slapped on.

Ya this is not good, you just slapped everything on there, one after another...try to blend it in and keep up with the flow, its not good to have the whole sig covered with c4ds, it just looks flat out ugly like that...also put some depth into it, put multiple layers and some time into it, theres some good tutorials you can follow even on this site...keep this in mind, a decent sig has atleast a minimum of 20 layers in it