(adsbygoogle = window.adsbygoogle || []).push({}); I made this signature for Matteram. In the beginning I was like the hell with this. Because I couldnt see any good that would come of this. This was done in 30 minutes. But I think it came out better than expected.

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lacks depth
I can see some parts of the c4d that i would have cut out (it still looks fine...i just would have trimmed off some of the stuff that didnt go with the flow)
text isn't bad, but it could be better
Keep it up kratos =D

1. Some of the C4D should be erased. (IMO)
2. The text is okay, but it seems to dark.

Good Job though.

1. The square tiles is a very noobish effect.
2. Weird render positioning.
3. Odd specks randomly positioned.
4. Bad lighting.
5. No flow.
6. Lack of depth.

You're getting there.

OG above me seems to have nailed it.
However I notice you have become orange. Nice one.