But harsh comments are my specialty :roll::
1. The swirl is a very noobish effect that takes away from your focal. Instead try c4d's.
2. There is no depth. Layers of effects are key in sig making.
3. Text seems slapped on and the yellow behind it doesn't fit.
4. Odd size, tone the height down about 50% and width 20%.
5. Poop brown is never a pleasing color scheme. xD
6. Weird render positioning, should be all the way to the right.
7. Generally lacks flow/substance/effects
Seems you're still a beginner. All I can say is utilize some tutorials for now.
i am unable to find any accurate tutorials for what I am lacking!! If you could link me to one i would appreciate it :angel: