Text is too much of a focal.
Render is too much in the background.
The background is plain.
Too much empty space.
Coloring is messed up.
C4d's don't blend.
Smudging layer above everything completely ****ed up the colors in this. If you wanna change up the coloring, use gradient maps or various other adjustment layers.
Keep practicing and you will get there eventually. Look at some tutorials and I recommend following them step by step to help you learn the program :y:.
BTW, just to get a bit off topic, if I don't CnC on any of you GFXers works, it is because I am downloading Fallout New Vegas and have 17 different downloads running at the same time (My computer is lagging...
BAD). I should be back to full CnC tomorrow night

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