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02-17-2009, 09:42 PM #1

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02-17-2009, 09:44 PM #2

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Nothing on the left or right side. Lower the scanlines opacity, erase in some part over the focal point. The render seems too thin. Make a lighting source Smile

02-17-2009, 09:48 PM #3

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what lordafi said....

02-17-2009, 09:49 PM #4

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Originally posted by lordafi

Nothing on the left or right side. Lower the scanlines opacity, erase in some part over the focal point. The render seems too thin. Make a lighting source Smile

i know about the sides i tried to put a c4d on the right to fill it but it didnt work out so i made it not so noticeable and there wasn't enough space on the left for me to put anything in so ill try to add a light source and such Happy

02-17-2009, 10:40 PM #5

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dont like the green text it doesnt fit in with the other colours

02-17-2009, 10:49 PM #6

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is it green im color blind so when im looking for colors something the same i use the color picker thing to click on part of the render

02-17-2009, 11:33 PM #7

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I like this one, It just has a smooth feel to it

02-18-2009, 12:08 AM #8

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thats exactly what i thaught of when i was making it because of the way the fire blends into the background Happy

02-21-2009, 03:46 AM #9

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render is stretched

02-21-2009, 06:26 PM #10

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post the stock cause i think ive seen this before... not much work done but still looks good...
im not saying you ripped but im saying i think i saw this in a render form with al the fire and stuff..