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The light on the chest is too much of a pull from the focal, I'd say it should be removed.

I agree with Irish, the light should be removed. I also think the background is a bit plain. Maybe add a stock in and some C4D's :y:. Also, put the text above the gradient :y:. Very plain. Keep practicing.

The smudging should be blended, why not try to smudge the edges of the focal a little bit? The lighting is fine actually, it's pretty well done, except for the light in the middle. The render looks a bit choppy, you know, rendered badly. I believe this signature should be a warm color, but there's green under his arm.