hmm it's ok to me, but its a little simple and dare i say "boring". Id just add some more interesting C4D's in and that and it'll probably look pretty decent. Like you said the text isnt great but then i suck at text pretty bad too so cant really comment, but opacity is useful when making it blend. Finally i dont like the noise smudging around his head. Other than that its fine and as usual i think it just needs a little tweaking. Good luck

7/10