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Focus point isn't defined enough.
As you said, got a bit messy.
I think that you shouldn't have messed around with the render.
Made it a perfect edged render.

But! I do like the background texture's. It looks good.
Cool render too!

I could agree withthis cept maybe get that render outta the bg smehow i also think that you could make the render bigger or the canvas smaller and add some text xD other than that good job kiu!

Oh, I see what you mean about the canvas size.
I was going to say something about the text too!

IDk canvas size is more of a personal preference but if you know the rule of thirds like in photography, you should try and use that. if you dont know it, google it.