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I worked nearly all day on this and I'm a tiny bit cranky so PLEASE don't be harsh in the comments thanks..

Lovely, I like the effects but what cuts me off a bit is the clipping mask or the robotic effect on Misa's arms. It is because it feels like you cut the body off and clipping masked it. Hope that wasn't harsh.

lol not harsh and it was hard because I used a pic that was human/robot and the only part that had robot was his face so it was kinda hard to match it with her arm :S

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that made truly no sense and I just realized what you meant lol ..

It's kinda hard to explain what I meant. But basically, it's like you erased the arm off and just pasted in some robot parts.

-I don't know why but the robot parts don't seem to look like they belong there. They don't actually look like they are inside her arm. (I am no pro at doing stuff like this so I can't really tell you how to fix it. Ask pV_Irish :y.
-For some reason, it all looks a bit low quality. I don't know whether thats your fault or the render/c4d's you used.
-The C4D's don't all seem to follow the same style. (TLKOG had to tell me about this a while ago) Your C4D's should follow the same relative style. So, for example, if you use a sharp, pointy C4D (can't think of a better example. If you don't understand I can show you) you should follow that same sharp, pointy style in all your C4D's.
-Not a big fan of the white thing on her right side.
-Depth seems a bit off, but it isn't terrible.
-Text is pretty good.
-I like what you were trying to do. Which, in general, you did a pretty good job of accomplishing.

Keep practicing and if I was too harsh.... Well, I don't think I was harsh .

I think that you should smoothen the robot bits in her face abit. I know it supposed to be rugged and rough, but IMO I think that it will be better if it looks more 'ripped' so to speak.

Really good man, your hard work paid off in this one. You pulled off the style as well :y: small things like the arm and the smudge/smoke on the right hand side are the little imperfections but other than that great work man keep it up :p

Yeah, for some reason the robotic parts look like you've just cut out a section and the robotic part was put on , other than that its awesome.

Depth could use some work and the robotic part on her face looks unnatural.

Well, first off, it looks great, to the natural eye, it's believable, but here in a graphics forum its all about perfection, and nothings perfect. (and learning, correct me if im wrong)

For me, i find the robot parts (SURPRISE!) are distracting. Just a little bit. It stands out which is good AND bad, i feel to much is going on (Depth,you need.). text i like, color/effects are excellent. BTW thought i would mention, im no pro, this is just me and what i like

Excellent work man, keep it up !!

PS: i've been drinking