Originally posted by Mr.Ryan
3/10 In my opinion
1.) Text is hard to read, also never "bevel" your text, too much text
2.) The background looks too messy and is the most eye catching thing in it. Should be the render itself.
3.) Usually only have 1 main render. But on your second render the C4D on his arm and face needs erased.
4.) The blur attempt needs a lot of work.
You need to watch some tutorials and pick up tips of others. In time you will get better. But as for now I cannot rate this more than 3.
Thank you very much for your criticism. I understand now what you're saying and am looking forward to making improvements on this picture. I figure I should have it much better by either tomorrow or Saturday. I'm thinking of eliminating the 2nd render, focusing more on the first, and making a much more mellow text.